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Showing posts with label Term 1 2014 writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Term 1 2014 writing. Show all posts

Friday, 13 March 2015

Taking his first step

last November on one Saturday I was standing at my bedroom window staring at the tree on my front yard  I wanted to climb it but I didn't bother I was too lazy . I jumped on my bed with a big ahhh! I knew my little cousin Toni is here . As I focused on what to do an idea popped in to my mind. What if I made him walk that would be cool ?

I rushed with excitement towards the bedroom he was in . As I spied to make sure he was awake.Toni sat up and looked cheerful at me. Looking at him so cheerful that made me to . I grabbed him marched with him joyfully down the hallway and into my room .


Stood him at the bedroom window and I sat down at front of the bed . I called his and told him to come , I did it  few times but it didn't work what are waste of my time I thought to myself . Then I looked at him and cried “ wasted my time “.He took his first step and then he fell on me , yeah !

I told my little sisters and my whole family that's
how happy I was two weeks from what had happen and  I still tell people about it . My mum is sick and tired of that story .How he took his first step made me feel like I did something good . Always take your time and be patient .

Wednesday, 16 April 2014

What I am still learning

this is what I am still learning and what I am still learning . As  you can I am learning about place values in whole numbers . And the is 60

Monday, 14 April 2014

Using Commas and "SPEECH " Marks

COMMAS

Comma - a pause

Use commas:

  • After and before direct speech.

“Help,” called out Serena. Joe said, “Get lost.”

  • To separate items in a list.

Ice cream, peaches, raspberries and strawberries.

  • To show a pause in a sentence with two  closely related ideas.

The dog loved chasing balls, running after them until it was tired.

Activity
Add commas where needed to the following sentences.

1. Mark had chocolate milk, ham sandwiches, crunchie bars, a pie and ice cream for lunch.

2. “ I’m sure I won’t get fat , ’’ he told his mum.

3. Dan was a great rugby player , and a good sport.

4. Kyana loved practising her poi skills , carrying her poi with her constantly.

5. “ Sione ,  “  said his mother  “Go and help your father with the dishes.”

6. I love to go to the beach , and collect shells.

7. My favourite foods are chocolate  ice cream ,  salt and vinegar chips , and chocolate mousse.



SPEECH MARKS

Put speech marks in the following sentences where needed.

1. “Isara,” come and help me, Sina said.

2. Cruz walked into the classroom and called out to his mate, “Can I borrow a pencil? ”

3. “The Mystics are going to win,” said Mrs Nua.

4. In the novel The Great Gatenby, by John Marsden, the main character Erle Gatenby says, “ “ “I’m cooler than a naked polar bear.”

5. “Get that dog away from me,” yelled Casey.  “It’s going to bite me!”

6. “I like the seaside - I grew up there, “

empathy recount



This movie to show how empathy works . This is my way showing empathy .  

Wednesday, 9 April 2014

Paula FiaFia Rehearsing

I felt quite , mad of my self because everyone was looking at me .


      I was on the stage I felt  clutched inside my stomach and my face was red .



When Gloria introduced the Tongan boys onto the stage I felt like I was go to faint and gonna cry .

Tuesday, 1 April 2014

Cyclone Lusi

Amazing nots today it is 50 knots and the forecast is very nasty . The cyclone is category 1 and the winds are making the most of it and some houses are down .
Where did this strong wind come from ,reporters all around new zealand are saying it came from the north pacific where fiji and tonga is around there.

They say it hit the north island first before it started to come down . Cyclon lusi is second tropical cyclone rains and winds .On that weekend it was pouring with rain the wind was extremely strong. Flipping over trampolines and basket ball hoop lusi was ruthless. Even though the winds were not as strong as expected.


Thursday, 27 March 2014

Math DLO

  this DLO is a math one created by Sione and Paula , it shows you all about what we learned.

Thursday, 13 March 2014

My Bio poem

Paula
Child of Peter and Mafi
Who loves Rugby and games
Who hates snakes rats and lizards
Who wants to go to America , Indonesia , China  and Tonga
Who wishes he could've met Breakers and the Lakers
Who is scared of nothing
Who dreams of being a good role model to others
Who is determined to do heaps of things before he dies
Who values close relationships with his family, friends, and students
Who is proud of who I am
Who lives in Panmure
Paula

Monday, 3 March 2014

Picnic 2014

On Friday it was so amazing because it was finally the school picnic.

Sport was cool when we went was  the best because I kick the ball and went into the water lucky it landed on the shallow part.

I so staving so I went and ate my cup cake. My lunch was yummy.

Diving in to the water, I liked looking under water because I saw a fish I tried to grab it.
As I grabbed it, it felt sharp, so I let go. I wanted it to come back to me.


I wish we could have a picnic every Friday cause it was fun.What a fun day we had at Pt England Reserve .

Thursday, 27 February 2014

Empathy


Empathy explains someone's feeling and being honest each others feelings . It really explain who love can really relate to others and putting yourself in there shoes. I like sharing feelings with other cause so I know what the other person feel about me and who I feel about him.

Sometimes people never show empathy they would never talk or never look at each other they would sometimes bully them or tell them to get lost . But sometimes they would show empathy .We can show empathy by showing them you care about  them .

we will show it by never leaving out and if you show the . People can uderstand that you are showing empathy

If we can show empathy good things would happen in our lives . I don’t like looking at people left out.



Thursday, 13 February 2014

My personal goals 2014

My Personal Goals - 2014   Date: 5 \ 2 \ 2014
My achievement I was most proud of last year in the classroom was playing rugby because we tried hard and got the shield.
The thing I was most proud of last year outside of the classroom was playing sports with my friends.
In reading my learning goal is to really focus on big words
To achieve this goal I need to listen to the teacher really well.
In writing my goal is to make my sentence more interesting.
To achieve this goal I need to use more vocab and more detail to the front and end of the sentence.
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In Maths my goal is to read the question really well so I understand what I am doing.
The learning area I think I need to improve in most is writing
In my learning my goal this term is to show 'Caring' for my learning tools and put them back in the right place when I finish.
My goal for this year around the classroom is to (behaviour / self management) show respect to my teacher and my classmates.
My goal for this year around the school is to perform a good role model to the little kids.
My parents goal for me this Term is focus on my learning and do good.

Wednesday, 12 February 2014

Writing sample

Some holidays can be quite boring like the long ones . First day of the holidays I slept in it was quite interesting because when I woke up I thought that i still have school. But I when I looked at the school finish yesterday



Days went bye as i keep looking at the calenda. I was waiting for that day for me to go back to school .Yeah! It was finally school. we arrived and I feelt so excited to see who was in my class.

I was in class i with two cool teachers Mrs Nua and Mr Barks .